Essay 1-03b: Lilo and Stich

Lilo and Stich is very warm story, so I felt happy after watching it, and I want to watch it again. Lilo and Stich are very cute, this movie was taught me family’s and love's importance from the movie. If I didn’t watch it, I didn’t notice that. The movie made us tell the importance, and I reconsidered it some other time. First I’ll write about family in this movie. Next I’ll write about my family in real life. After that I’ll write about love in this movie. Finally I’ll write about love in real life.

Lilo didn't have parents, because they had a traffic accident few years ago, so she lost in them. She lost her parent, but her older sister and she survived luckily. She hoped to have a family. Meanwhile Stich doesn't have a family when he was born. It made by a chemist, and it was made to destroy all things. So he couldn’t understand about the family.

I have a family, and I like it. I haven’t lost any my family’s members, but I have friends who have lost their parents, or brothers, or sisters. I think it is very important to make a bond of family. However I think the bend become to lack these days, because an opportunity of talking with family is fewer than before. We should talk more with our family.

Stich is very violent, so he always destroys many things. And he didn't know love, because he always was lonely. He had never been loved by anyone until he met Lilo, so he didn’t have consideration for others. Eventually he became the member of Lilo's family, so he didn't destroy things, and made several. He also learned to swim in seas.

I think the mind of person is able to change by love. It might change the mind good or bad, so we always try to take good care of other people. If we don't it, human relations break easily. If we given much love other people, we can make a good relation like Lilo and Stich. Love is very important for us to live.

At first Lilo didn’t have parents, and Stich didn’t have a family either. However Lilo became very happy, when Stich became a member of her family. And Stich became tender and kind, because he was known love by Lilo. The bend of family is very important for us, so love is able to change person's heart. I realized that we can live smoothly thanks to our family’s and friend’s love, so I want to treat them kindly.

(432words)

BR 1-12: Mr. Potter and Tabby

I read a English book. The title was Mr.Putter and Tabby.

The story's main character is Potter who is an old man. He lived all alone. He had no one to share his English muffins and his tea. All day, Mr. Potter watered his trees and clipped his roses.

One day, he wanted to a cat, so he went to the pet shop. There are many cats in the cage. But he couldn't find the favorite cat, so he asked the pet store lady. She said him that go to the shelter.

Mr.Potter went to the shelter. The shelter man brought Mr.Putter the old yellow cat. He decided to take the cat home. He named her Tabby. His life became to be very fun, because he was not alone. They always were together. Tabby and Mr.Potter could not remember life. They ate their muffins and their tea and enjoyed all time.

I thought it is great relationship, because they need each other. I respect the relation. I want to have a cat.

(172 words)

Portfolio for Writing III

Student ID: 08159

Portfolio for Writing III, Section 1C



(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links to blog posts	Dates yyyy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
1-01a (2009.04.08)	who am I??	2009.04.08	5	273	0	0	0	0
1-01b (2009.04.20)	Who am I??	2009.04.15	5	277	0	0	0	0
(1-01c)
1-02a (2009.06.01)	Not my university life	2009.05.28	5	325	0	0	1	0
1-02b (2009.07.06)	Not my university life	2009.6.25	5	397	1	0	3	0
(1-02c)
1-03a (2009.06.29)	Lilo and Stich	2009.06.29	6	392	0	0	3	0
1-03b (2009.07.13)	Lilo and Stich	2009.07.15	6	432	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	32	2096	1	0	7	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

・ Website review : Cooking

I think this essay is the best, because the day I was very interesting, and the blog was written in detail. When I watch the blog, I can remember the day.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Not my university life	2009.06.25	21	You should take it, it is very convenient if you have a car.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	2009.06.27	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	2009.06.29	I think so that. I want to take it soon.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• Yes, it does. My recent commemt was in footer widget.
  

  
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I wasn't given any commemt from classmate.
  

• I watched my friend's blog, and I want to reflect my blog.
  

  
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates: yyyy.mm.dd	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	2007.05.16	39	1
BR 1-01	Henny-Penny	2009.04.15	90	0
BR 1-02	Toad and frog	2009.04.22	147	0
BR 1-03	Crocodile	2009.05.01	123	0
BR 1-04	Golden hair's garl	2009.05.08	146	0
BR 1-05	Bo and Annie	2009.05.12	293	0
BR 1-06	A ghost	2009.05.27	424	0
BR 1-07	First Kiss	2009.06.07	290	0
BR 1-08	Arthur	2009.06.12	240	0
BR 1-09	Arthur 2	2009.06.28	222	0
BR 1-10	Submarine Adventure	2009.07.01	201	0
BR 1-11	Mr. Putter	2009.07.08	146	0
BR 1-12	Mr. Potter and Tabby	2009.07.11	172	0
---	---	Totals:	2533	0

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")		○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)		○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)		○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")		○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. books (12) brainstorming (1) essay prep. (2) Essays (6) free-writing (1) iniversity (1) Lilo and Stich (2) lists (1) movies (3) quickpost (1) reviews (12) revisions (3) speaking (1) university (3) Who am I (2)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ...Power point ...Recording ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yyyy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...There are a lot of pictures and graphics.
   

2. ...The sentences are all colorful!
   

3. ...My blog is interesting.
   

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing for it

Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...I could have a skill which is to write English sentences.
  

• ...I could know how to use the computer .
  

• ...I could touch with my classmates.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...I want to write my blog every day.
  

• ...I will be careful speling miss.
  

• ...When I watch other blog, I want to write a comment.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c and Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c portfolios (2008-09).

2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 1st (spring) semester PPF first.

3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

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BR 1-11: Mr. Putter

I read a book , and the title was Mr.Potter & Tabby Catch the cold.

The book's story was a day which Mr.Potter had a cold. It was snow and very cold in that day, so he caught the cold. When he was a child, he liked a cold, because her mother brought him warm soup, minty tea and adventure books. But he is old now.

He called Mrs. Teaberry, Mrs. Teaberry is good friend and neighbor for him. And she said to him " I'll send Zeke." Twenty minutes later there was a dog. It was Mrs. Teaberry's good dog,
Zeke. It brought Chicken soup and peppermint tea to him.

He did the call of thanks to her. And he asked her to bring an adventure book. In a while, Zeke came his house again and it brought the book. They read it, and sleep with them.

The book was very fun, and it made me warm. I want to read it again.

(146 words)

My typping homework

About my blogging

When I became a university student, I often write a blog. Blog is my writing homework, so I have to do that. I don't want to write a blog at first, because it is troublesome for me to write it. While I wrote it every day, I became happy. I wrote an everyday event, and publish some pictures. And I can remember the past when I watch my blog. I wrote all English, so I can study English. It is important for me to renew my blog, so I won't to write my blog. My friend's blogs also are very interesting. I like to watch that.

Vacation plans

I don't have a vacation plan, but I want to go to a sea. I don't buy a swimwear yet, so I have to but it. A swimwear’s cost is high, so I get my salary and I will buy it. And I want to watch fireworks. It is performed in various places. For example, Kumamoto castle, Uto, Tamana and so on. I want to watch fireworks of Tamana most. But I have to do study my lecture. The lecture's test will held on September 13th, so I will be busy in this summer vacation. But I will do my best to pass the test. I'm looking forward to come vacation.

(222 words)

BR 1-10: Submarine Adventure

I read a book. The title was a Submarine Adventure. I thought that the book was very fantastic.

It was a Wilf's birthday story. Wilf showed his friend a birthday present. It was a submarine in the box. Wilf picked up it in the box, and he put its headlight. The friend lighted up by the headlight, and they became very small. After that they were in the place where they didn't know. There were a lot of boats and Wilf's submarine. There was a Professor Tangle in the submarine. They got on the submarine with the professor Tangle, and went into the bottom of the sea. There were a lot of fish, so they were very moved.

The submarine went deeper and deeper. Then there was a cave ahead of them, and the submarine went into the cave. There were diamonds all over the walls. When they was very excited, the wall of the cave began to shake. And rocks and stones fell around them!!

When they noticed, they were in Biff's room.

If I can experience that, I'm very fun!! I like this story, because I'm very excited when I read it. I want to read this book again.

(201words)