Essay 2-02b: Coca-Cola and Pepsi

I like Coca-Cola and Pepsi, so I often drink those. However I don't know the different of the two. Though both Coca-Cola and Pepsi are popular soft drink, there are differences between the two. So I wanted to look into various aspects.

First I examined Coca-Cola. The history was surprised for me. There was a medical treatment master. His name was Pem berton. He hit on the development of the medical liquor. And he developed it in 1885. The name was French・Wine・Coca. One day, he had mixed the soda water with it by chance. But it was delicious, so he added syrup in it, and he began to sell it. It is the Coca-Cola now. He happened to make the Coca-Cola.

Next it is sales of Coca-Cola. It has sold about 2.6 trillion yen a year. It shows that it is drunken 13 hundred million cups a day by people. It is a remarkable figure!! And it is said that there are only two people who know how to make Coca-Cola. The two people don't ride on the same airport because of preventing the secret.

Second I examined Pepsi. The history of Pepsi was different from that of Coca-Cola. Keyreb Bradhum who was a medical treatment master sold a drink. The drink was a medical treatment medicine to cure a suffering from indigestion. The drink contained pepsin which was indigestion ferment, so it named Pepsi cola by him. But Pepsi was not popular than Coca-Cola, so they began to sell it with the beer bottle whose amount of content is larger than the bottle of Coca-Cola. Therefore management of Pepsi goes well now.

The sales of Pepsi are not more than that of Coca-Cola. But it has sold about 350 hundred million yen a year. It was sold in about 200 countries. It is famous that they have a lot of kinds and an ordinal taste. For example, they sold Pepsi azuki, Pepsi siso and Pepsi nex.

I was very surprised about the history of Coca-Cola. It was made by chance, and it has become a very popular drink. On the other hand, Pepsi made many kinds of the taste, and it becomes popular now. I think the idea of Pepsi is a reason for its popularity. It is great that Coca-Cola and Pepsi complete each other, so there will be a lot of more excellent goods.

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Essay 2-02a: Coca-Cola and Pepsi

I like Coca-Cola and Pepsi, so I often drink that. But I don't know the different of the two. Both of that are popular in all over the world. I wanted to examine about the history, the popularity rating and other different.

First I examined about Coca-Cola. The history was surprised for me. There was a medical treatment master. His name was Pem berton. He hit on the development of the medical liquor. And he developed it in 1885. The name was French・Wine・Coca. One day, he had mixed the soda water with it by chance. But it was delicious, so he added syrup in it, and he began to sell it. It is the Coca-Cola now. He happened to make the Coca-Cola.

Next it is sales of Coca-Cola. It has sold about 2.6 trillion yen a year. It shows that it is drunken 13 hundred million cups a day by people. It is a remarkable figure!! And it is said that there are only two people who know how to make Coca-Cola. The two people don't ride on the same airport because of preventing the secret.

Second I examined about Pepsi. Pepsi changed mixing that like stock solution of Coca-Cola. And they sold it. But it was not popular than Coca-Cola, so they began to sell it with the beer bottle whose amount of content is larger than the bottle of Coca-Cola. And the cost was as same as Coca-Cola. Therefore management of Pepsi goes well now.

The sales of Pepsi are not more than that of Coca-Cola. But it has sold about 350 hundred million yen a year. It was sold in about 200 countries. It is famous that they have a lot of kinds and an ordinal taste. For example, they sold Pepsi azuki, Pepsi siso and Pepsi nex. And they have a lot of websites. The websites are different in each country, so we would not get tired.

I was very surprised about the history of Coca-Cola. It was happened to make, and it has became a very popular drink now. On the other hand, Pepsi devises the taste and websites. I think the effort is a popular reason. It is great that Coca-Cola and Pepsi complete each other, so there will be a lot of more excellent goods.

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Writing IV September 30

I think Ayaka's advice "to post blogs every day" (PUMPKIN, July 8) is good, because I can write many sentences. I think Ayaka should decide how many words you write in a day.

I agree to Hanako's suggestion " to use pictures more" (Hanako, July 8 ), because I didn't use many pictures. I will use it more.

I think Shiori's advice "try to write own my words" (Shiori, July 8 ) is difficult for me too. If I'm not able to write some English sentences, I always depend on an example sentence. We should study English more.

Kumi's advice "to cute more" ( Kumi, July 8 ) is good. I think you should have added YouTube on your blog, so it will be great more. I will do that!!

I think Rie's blog "to write with many words" ( Rie, July 8) is important for us, because we should write 15000 words. If we write many sentences in a day, we can arrive at 15000 words.
We should write more in a day.

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